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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:08, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Info box
  • It says promotional single but nowhere else in the article? Was it actually released as one or confirmed somewhere? Alexandra Burke confirmed in an interview that "The Silence" was a promotional single, and even then I had a hard time proving that I was right to the reviewer.
Lead
  • Probably best to say upcoming eighth studio album, as it hasn't been released yet. How it's written implies that the album has been released.
Release and reception
  • "In July 2011, the Sugababes released a teaser of the song online.[11] The full version of "Freedom" premiered online in August 2011.[10]" could be one sentence, it's a bit jolted at the moment.
  • This could all be one paragraph really.
Music video
Status
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