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Citation and Rewrite

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This article is poorly developed, unsourced, and requires significant attention. The article doesn't cite any sources for any of its information. This needs to be fixed so that all pieces of information are given proper citations from reliable sources and, if none can be found, they should be removed from the article. The article itself is composed of a large lead section and needs to be split into sections detailing the Background of the area before the murders, Victims/Killings, Modus Operandi, Suspects, and Popular culture (if any). The latter section should be structured as a well written paragraph rather than bullet points. Each section will need to have information added to it, with proper citations from reliable sources given for each piece of information added. Hopefully someone comes along and gives this and other articles on unidentified serial killers the attention it needs to fulfill its full potential.--Paleface Jack 16:19, 28 April 2018 (UTC)