Talk:French destroyer Cassard (1931)/GA1

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:55, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Just a few minor points:

  • suggest "100-kilogram sized ones" as sized is redundant
  • "the funnels and and the"
  • say that Jacques Cassard was an 18th C naval officer
  • the completed date in the infobox isn't supported in the body
  • suggest extending the piping of "attacked the ships" to include "in Mers-el-Kébir"

That's it. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:32, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Keep this up and you'll soon be rivalling me for GA reviews!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:47, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Long way to go to get anywhere near you... This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:32, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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