Talk:French destroyer Léopard
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 19:26, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
- What type of ship was Savorgnan de Brazza? Also, worth a red link?
- Might be worth giving some explanation for Operation Catapult - there's no article for the operation as a whole, just the attack on Mers el-Kebir.
- "...command of Leopardwas"
- Any info on what effect removing the boiler and funnel had on the ship's speed?
- "...collided with the sloop HMS Lowestoft and damaged her bow" - this is unclear. Which ship had its bow damaged? I'd assume Leopard, but the way it's written, it sounds like Leopard damaged Lowestoft's bow. Parsecboy (talk) 19:26, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for your helpful comments. I trust that my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:19, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, nice work as always. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
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