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Can anyone find any evidence/citation of his remians being entombed in Nintendo's headquarters? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.175.93.30 (talk) 21:46, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply] 


                                                      NINTENDO  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.200.190.218 (talk) 15:33, 21 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sources used for GA nomination.[edit]

The following books were read online :

The Story of Nintendo : https://books.google.be/books?id=M-pGHGDm5a4C&redir_esc=y (Google Books)

Game Over, Press Start to Continue: How Nintendo Conquered the World : https://archive.org/details/0966961706/mode/2up Maxime12346

Nintendo: The Company and Its Founders : https://archive.org/details/nintendocompanyi0000fire/mode/2up

(talk) 19:56, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. joeyquism (talk) 22:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: DanganMachin (talk · contribs) 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nominator: Maxime12346 (talk · contribs) 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: NatwonTSG2 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Hello @DanganMachin I decided to review this article because it looks pretty simple and easy so. This article seems a handful of fixes to be addressed.

Review[edit]

Lead

  • For the infobox, not much other than the fact that you're unable find sources for his unnamed daughter and the cause of his death. I think this source might help a bit.
  • In the first sentence, you could change who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, the company now known as Nintendo into who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, later known as Nintendo.

Early life

  • Shouldn't this section's title be renamed into Early life.
  • P2: Could this section be one entire paragraph and you could removed the additional reference there.
Yamauchi Fusajirô Shôten or Yamauchi Nintendo
Location Problem
P3 S4 A typo for Fusajiro
P5 S2 At the end of the sentence, you seem to put two periods between a quote mark so remove the second one.
P5 S3 the date to the year. Also removed such of between website and Watada.
P5 S5 You forget to put a period at the end of the sentence.
P6 S1 Koppaï Zei and Karuta Zei shouldn't be quoted so remove the quote marks
P6 S2 Peroid at the end of the sentence.
P7 S1 removed even because it kinda made the sentence like a direct quote.
P8 S1 unless you're making a direct quote, removed yet again.

Personal details

  • S1: With no son into Without a son
  • S4: change claim into claimed

Fixs.[edit]

Thank you for reviewing my article !

Here are the fixs I made :

Lead

  • Sentence Done.

Early Life

  • Before Nintendo -> Early Life Done.
  • One paragraph + reference. I have fused the first two paragraphs but I don't see what reference you are talking about. Done.

Yamauchi Fusajirô Shôten or Yamauchi Nintendo

  • Typo fixed. Done.
  • Point added. Done.
  • removed even Done.
  • removed yet again Done.

Personal details

  • S1 Done.
  • S4 Done.

DanganMachin (talk) 17:09, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@NatwonTSG2 I have finished to adress the fixs you said the article needed. (: Could you please put the follow-up review in the form of a table if possible ? Thank you for your time. DanganMachin (talk) 17:24, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@DanganMachin after learning some of my fixes for my other article which I'm working on, I decided to take one look of this article and realized that many fixes still need to be address so I would recommend to request this article at the Guild of Copy Editors. NatwonTSG2 (talk) 18:00, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since this review doesn't seem to be going anywhere, I'm going to quick fail this article, as it's already been listed at GOCE for further improvement. Best of luck with your further writing, and hopefully we'll see this back at GAN in an improved state. joeyquism (talk) 22:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by AirshipJungleman29 talk 10:04, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by DanganMachin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

DanganMachin (talk) 15:36, 9 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

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