Talk:Garden Bros Circus
Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: A couple of things to keep in mind while writing articles. Citations should be in the body - not the lead, per MOS:LEAD. Also following a sentence with 8 citations is distracting - see WP:OCVERCITE. Also the article is an orphan which means no other articles link to it. Try to find other articles where you can add a blue link to this article like - here is one List of circuses and circus owners. Thanks for the article and keep on contributing please!