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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 20:36, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 20:36, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The image tag for the 78 rpm is incorrect. Per File:VocalionDapper.jpg the Vocalion logo has expired copyright, so there's no need for a FUR. Since the image is PD the incorrect tagging won't affect this GA, but you may want to fix it anyway.

  • The source in FN4 is given as "Gayle Dean Wardlow: Garfield Akers – From the Hernando Cottonfields … , p. 27" which is not enough to locate the source for verification. Is this a book? Same for FN6.
  • Starkville High School is not a reliable source.
  • What makes juneberry78s.com a reliable source?
  • "because it was too dangerous for them there": why was it dangerous?
  • There are several unsourced sentences in the article -- at the end of both paragraphs of "Recording", and at the end of the "Work" section.
  • "without any special emphasis or a ternary shuffle rather boring": looks like an incompletely edited sentence?
  • "so that the actual heavy times are shifted": what does "heavy time" mean?
  • I think you probably mean "drama", not "dramaturgy".

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:52, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The helper5667, just checking you are planning to work on this? Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:53, 28 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Failing as no response in two weeks. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:53, 5 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]