Talk:George Watt Park
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Copy editing[edit]
Much of this article read like a company brochure, it was overly descriptive and chatty, so I edited down by about a fourth. Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:23, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Sources[edit]
The article has no sources and no lead section. There is one sentence that I moved here until we have an independent source for it: "And so began the company that is now the oldest, largest family-owned mail order gardening company in America." Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:26, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Alternative information[edit]
I'm trying to find out Park's birthday so I typed his name in at Google and found this url. It conflicts with some of the information here at the Wikipedia article. I don't know which is true. [ Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:52, 13 February 2016 (UTC) (UTC)http://www.saveseeds.org/biography/park/