Talk:German destroyer ZH1

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Review: April 6, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 14:37, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 14:37, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'd make clear in the introduction that the ship wasn't finished when the Germans captured her.
Fair use rational seems fine.
"While fitting out Germany invaded the Netherlands" - this needs to be fixed, as it currently reads that Germany was fitting out while it invaded the Netherlands. One solution would be to say "While the ship was fitting out, Germany invaded..."
It would be worthwhile to add a note explaining what "ZH" means.
- I don't think that I've seen an actual explanation of that, although I know what it means. Any pointers as to a location would be welcome.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:25, 29 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Kapitan zur See" - add the umlaut, link, and the English translation.
"Their fire was extremely effective..." - whose fire? The most recent firing was German.
"They later fired at Z32 which set Tartar on fire." - this reads to me like the British fire set Tartar on fire.
Harv errors in the Bibliography section - need to remove the |ref= parameters since sfn templates aren't being used. Parsecboy (talk) 15:27, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, see if the changes that I made are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:25, 29 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, I'm happy to promote. Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 6 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]