Talk:German submarine U-255/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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A few comments:

  • The lede should either be entirely referenced or lack them entirely. Make sure that everything in the lede is discussed later on in the article, so that you can reference them later on instead of in the first few paragraphs of the article.
Done. I've even added a new paragraph called "Construction".--White Shadows you're breaking up 00:22, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The lede still has references in it. Leo 04:11, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No, I still want refs in the lead. You said that it can be either way. Do I need to add in more?--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:33, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Either they are all referenced or nothing is. Leo 03:54, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done. If there is still an issue, just tell me and I'll remove all of the refs.--White Shadows you're breaking up 17:33, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you be more specific about "Various AA guns"?
Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:33, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Would it be Refitting and 4th patrol?
Yes, I've fixed that as well.--White Shadows you're breaking up 00:22, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Both ships were loaded with timber destined for the United States, and no survivors were found from either ship." Can you reference this please?
Working on it.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:33, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:48, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you expand the 9th and 10th patrols? The later patrols could stand to use some expansion as individual sections.
Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:19, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Would the bibliography be better suited as a Further reading? Also, couldn't the two external links in the bibliography just go under the External links?
Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 00:27, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is it possible to add some more varied sources? All but one looks to be from the same site. I'd suggest trying Google Books/Scholar, Archive.org, the Library of Congress, etc. See what you can find from more than just that one site.
Working on it.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:33, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a few more citations from other sites and even a couple of books. I've also sxpanded the external links section.--White Shadows you're breaking up 17:33, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • No coordinates for the Akademik Shokalskij?
Sadly, she was never found and since the ice up int he artic is the smae for miles, there was no markings for the crew of U-255 to mark where she was sunk.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:33, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Another fine article. Leo 23:33, 5 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Leo 23:33, 5 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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