Talk:German torpedo boat T17

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Review: January 19, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this one. Comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 10:20, 10 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead: "...the ship was transferred to France...": suggest swapping transferred for deployed. Transferred makes it sound like T17 was transferred to the French state.
Design and description: the beam dimensions in text don't quite match the infobox.
Modifications: "Early-war modifications were limited to": suggest amending this a little "Early-war modifications to the Type 37 boats were limited to..." to make it more explicit this discussion is in relation to the class.
Citations: for notes 8 and 9, which Whitley is being cited?
References: place the Whitley refs in date order?
- Nah, I go by title rather than pub date
Image tag checks out, no dupe links, external links work.

Nice tidy article, minimal action required. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 22:24, 18 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review; see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:46, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]