Talk:Get Back (ASAP)/GA1
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Reviewer: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 16:54, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
Doing... Alright, I'll take a look. Expect a review within a few days. Erick (talk) 16:54, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
- Lead
- "The track was written and produced by Marcel Prodan and Andrei Nemirschi, and was recorded at their Maan Studio" Where is Maan Studio located?
- "but also comparing it to its predecessor", "Mr. Saxobeat" (2011)" Positively or negatively? If it's not in a negative way, replace "but" with "while".
- Composition and reception
- Per MOS:DECADE, it should be written as "1990s", not "90s".
- Music videos
"clip was shot by Iulian Moga at Castel Film in Bucharest, Romania, in one single day." Remove "single", "one day" is sufficient.
- "1 Q Sapro, Marcel Prodan and Andrei Nemirschi have cameo appearances throughout the video." Who is 1 Q Sapro? Unlike the other two, this person is only mentioned once in the article.
More to come... Erick (talk) 23:27, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: All done and added until now. Thank you! Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:27, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: Any updates? Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:20, 27 June 2017 (UTC)
Continuing on...
- Music video
- Per WP:PAIC, footnotes should come after an adjacent punctuation such as commas and sentences.
- " Los 40 Principales cited..." → "A review/editor/music critic (whichever you want to put it) for Los 40 Principales cited..."
- Credits and personnel
- Record studios aren't usually included on the personnel sections so Maan Studios should be removed.
That's about it. I'm sorry about the wait, life has been *way* more busier than usual. Erick (talk) 21:49, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: No worries, thank you very much for your review. I've fixed everything you listed here. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:40, 29 June 2017 (UTC)