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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) I will review the article:) 20:17, 17 January 2012 (UTC)
- No dead links or disambiguation pages. That's good ! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22
- 10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lead
- "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from the group's seventh studio album, ---> "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from their seventh studio album... (because there is repeating of the word group in the sentence)— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- It was written by Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob ManzoliIt and produced by The Smeezingtons. ---> It was written by Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass, Rob Manzolilt, Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars and produced by the latter three under their stage name The Smeezingtons.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- The song was released on 31 August 2009 ---> The song was released on August 31, 2009.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Not done. Britain uses dd/mm/yy format. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- Emil Nava and features the group's members in a house of mirrors, a bird cage and on a couch ... on a couch? I mean I don't find it necessary here. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- Background and composition (merge the both sections since the composition one is too small to standing like that)
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Not done.
- I have expanded the composition section, hopefully it is long enough now. Till I Go Home (talk) 01:04, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- Its okay. We can treat them like separate sections. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- In late-April ... remove the hyphen — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- "Get Sexy", which was selected as the album's lead single, was written by The Smeezingtons, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob Manzoli.[3] It was produced by The Smeezingtons ... use the sentence from the lead.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- No 6 July, 2009... July 6, 2009— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- again August 31, 2009— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- The song has been described as a "slamming dance anthem" ... Who described it? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
- Composition
- Musicnotes.com is published by Sony/ATV Music Publishing. Change it in the text and the reference.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- Maybe you can also reduce the repeating of the song in the section.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- Critical reception
- unlink Boom Boom Pow per Wikipedia:OVERLINK— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- David Balls of Digital Spy awarded ---> David Balls of Digital Spy gave— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- Commercial performance
- Looks good
- Music video
- Some other primary information about the video? Which other music videos did Emil Nava direct? He has collaborate with the Babes before? Where was shot? Something? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- The video screenshot fails WP:NFCC#8. Remove it. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- References
Mmm they are pretty bad condition. Here are the tasks: — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
- 1. publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Médias
- 2. The same as 1
- 4. Same as 1 and 2
- 5. Same as 1, 2 and 4
- 6. Same us 1, 2, 4 and 5
- 7 Un-italicize iTunes. publisher= Apple
- 8 Un-italicize Discogs
- 9. work=Daily Mail|publisher=Associated Newspapers Ltd
- 10. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5 and 6
- 11. You have the task in the composition review
- 12. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 and 10
- 13. work=Guardian|publisher=Guardian Media Group
- 14. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 10 and 12
- 15. Un-italicize Popjustice
- 18. Same as the previous
- 19. publisher=UK Singles Chart. The Official Charts Company
- 20. Same as 19
- 21. Same as 19 and 20
- 22. publisher= MTV UK. Viacom
- 28. Same as 9
- 29. Same as before
- 30. Link Capital FM
- 31. Un-italicize Sugababes.de
- 33. Needs accessdate
- 34-43. All need accessdate
- Will post more comments tomorrow. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 00:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- All in all
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- I addressed all the issues above except the music video screenshot, where I changed the caption. Is it relevant now? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- I put in Digital spy in the publisher now. :) Till I Go Home (talk) 09:05, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
- Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)