Talk:Gilli (Hebridean earl)/GA1

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 19:23, 15 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for a review later. Miyagawa (talk) 19:23, 15 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, finally getting around to the review.

No DAB links.
All images have suitable licenses.
Referencing all looks suitable. In fact, it's a comprehensively sourced article.
"most power Orcadian earls," - most powerful?
"Sigurðr appears to have extended his authority into the Isles in the late tenth century, and Gilli appears to have acted as Sigurðr's viceroy or tributary earl in this region." - could you swap out one of the "appears" simply to avoid the repetition within the same sentence.
"and the fall Brian and Sigurðr" - I suspect this should either read "the fallen" or "the fall of"

@Brianann MacAmhlaidh: That's everything. Technically the citations should follow punctuation marks but I can see why you've placed them as you have in several places due to the number of citations, so I won't ask you to change that. An enjoyable read! Miyagawa (talk) 19:27, 16 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Miyagawa: OK done. Thanks for the review.--Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk) 21:58, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Brianann MacAmhlaidh: Great, happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 17:22, 22 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]