Talk:Glassheart (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:46, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Pretty good article. Just a few issues:

"Glassheart" is a song performed by British singer-songwriter Leona Lewis, from her third studio album of the same name, Glassheart (2012). → I really dislike how this is worded. If you remove some of the words, it reads that is a song performed by her from her third studio album. Instead, may I suggest something along the lines of: "Glassheart" is a song recorded by British singer-songwriter Leona Lewis for her third studio album of the same name (2012).
03:56 → Why is there a 0 here?
That track listing thing in the infobox... man...
I didn't even want it there. AARON• ^TALK 20:17, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
...while she visited him at his family home in Denver, Colorado. → ...at his family home in Denver, Colorado.
It was co-written by Lewis and Tedder with Brent Kutzle, Noel Zancanella, Justin Franks, Fis Shkreli and Peter Svensson. → Starting two sentences in a row with "it". Also, "with" sounds a bit awkward, what about using "alongside" instead?
It is about a girl's fear that her boyfriend will leave her and thus she protects her emotions and her heart from breaking. → Lyrically, it is about a woman's fear that her boyfriend will leave her and thus she protects her emotions and her heart from breaking.
headline → headlining
...and Fraser T Smith was producing for the album. → ...and that Fraser T Smith would be producing for the album.
Simon Cowell has heard some of the tracks and he loves it". → What's happening here?
I think the information about how she was having a stressful time in her personal life should be included in the lead.
The lead says the song is up-tempo, but nowhere else in the article does it state this.
I use "upbeat" in the Inspiration and development section.
BIG TIME → No shouting

— Statυs (talk, contribs) 19:46, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done everything. Thanks for reviewing. AARON• ^TALK 20:17, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No problem! Great job on the article; I am passing it! Side note, I never really liked Leona, but "Trouble" and "Glassheart" are amazing! So baby if you love me, let me know. Cause everything that hurts you've hurt before. You're about to tear this love apart. And break another glass heart... — Statυs (talk, contribs) 20:24, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I love this song so much. I am praying for it to be a single. I have tickets to see her in May, I hope it is on the set-list. AARON• ^TALK 20:27, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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