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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Infobox looks good.
  • "most nominated" → "most-nominated"

Early life and family[edit]

  • This section looks good.

Career[edit]

Theatre[edit]

  • Remove the comma after "began performing in 1974".
  • Add serial commas after the second use of "violin", Martin Short, and "Julia".
  • Avoid the repetitive use of the "In [year], [event]" formula in several sections.
  • Add a comma after "During the production".
  • Remove the comma after "Best Musical Performance".
  • Comma after "February 9, 2017" per WP:DATECOMMA.
  • Comma after the first use of The Guardian.
  • Avoid single-sentence paragraphs.

Film[edit]

  • Several paragraphs are missing sources.
  • Fix the "citation needed" issues.
  • Remove the comma after "attached to the role".
  • Remove the comma after "for this performance".
  • "stellar reviews" needs more verification with additional sources.
  • Several paragraphs also lack sources here.
  • Commas after sentences starting with "In the film".

Television[edit]

  • Paragraphs. Need. Sources.
  • "highly rated" → "highly-rated"
  • The phrase "highly-rated" also needs a source.
  • "that network" → "that the network"
  • Comma after "in addition".
  • "open to do" doesn't sound encyclopedic.
  • "half hour" → "half-hour"

Reception, acting style, and legacy[edit]

  • Comma after Bridget Fonda.
  • Other than that, this section looks good.

Personal life[edit]

  • Remove the comma after the second use of "Bozeman".
  • Add a comma after Angus King.

Activism[edit]

  • "which performed" → "that performed"

Acting credits and awards[edit]

  • Expand this section with some mentions of awards and selected filmography.

References[edit]

  • Properly cite sources.
  • Several citations are missing authors/websites/dates.
  • Avoid using ALL-CAPS per WP:ALLCAPS and WP:SHOUT.
  • Also avoid having ".com" in the website parameters.
  • Page Six is not reliable per WP:NYPOST.
  • Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".

Progress[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Notes
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Hi there, yes my bad. I got caught up with the other article that I forgot to work on this one. Hopefully I'll be able to make enough progress during the timeframe. Thanks for the extension. Film Enthusiast (talk) 18:24, 11 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]