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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk04:12, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Created by NoonIcarus (talk). Self-nominated at 09:49, 2 January 2022 (UTC).[reply]

  • Long enough, new enough. On a history making individual. Inline citations throughout. Fairly neutral although it highlights her achievements as the article is mainly sourced from her obits. I made a few copy-edits for clarity but a couple of sentences are still unclear. I checked with the Google translation of the Eldiario Spanish source but the translation confused me more. Anyway, I added a couple of pointers in the sentences. Please clarify them.
    • As for the hooks, I prefer the main hook better than ALT1. I'd tweak it to something like:
... that after elected as mayor of Baruta, Venezuelan politician Gloria Lizárraga de Capriles had to work out of a shopping mall? Hybernator (talk) 21:36, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Hybernator: Many thanks! The main hook essentially either means that Gloria did not have an own office to work in (hence why she needed to operate from a place in a shopping mall) or that her office was said place in the mall. I was worried about this translation too and I wasn't sure which one would be better, or would covey the closest meaning. NoonIcarus (talk) 22:41, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]