Talk:Gordon McClymont

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Good articleGordon McClymont has been listed as one of the Agriculture, food and drink good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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June 25, 2013Good article nomineeListed
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Reviewer: Curly Turkey (talk · contribs) 05:31, 5 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    Nicely written. Only a couple of hairsplits:
    • "From 1947 to 1949, he attended the University of Cambridge under a Walter and Eliza Hall Veterinary Research Fellowship, from which he earned a doctor of philosophy." Did he earn the degree from Cambridge, or from the Walter and Eliza Hall Veterinary Research Fellowship?
      Cambridge. Cla68 (talk) 10:26, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "pregnancy toxaemia" is pretty obscure to the general reader. Might want to link it (to Pre-eclampsia?)
      [1] Cla68 (talk) 10:28, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "For example, as an undergraduate, he had received": I don't think the past perfect is correct here.
      [2] Cla68 (talk) 10:40, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • link New England University College (to University of New England (Australia)?)
      [3] Cla68 (talk) 10:47, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "pointed-out" drop the hyphen
      [4] Cla68 (talk) 10:50, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "The impact of the resulting improvements in Australia's livestock production were". "The impact" is the subject, so this should be "was" and not "were"
      [5] Cla68 (talk) 10:52, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "One hundred-sixty graduated with honors." Only numbers from 21 to 99 are hyphenated. Also, is "honors" not spelled "honours" in Australian English?
      [6] [7] Cla68 (talk) 10:54, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      I still count seven instances of "honor" in the article (I believe "honorary" is spelt without a "u", though). Curly Turkey (gobble) 03:47, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      I think I got the rest. Cla68 (talk) 13:14, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Ditto with "center", "centre"? I'm not an expert in Australian spelling.
      [8] Cla68 (talk) 10:59, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Professor R.B. Cumming" space between "R." and "B."
      Done. Cla68 (talk) 11:01, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "widely recognized-and acclaimed-as" I can't access the source, but I suspect these are emdashes or spaced endashes
      [9] Cla68 (talk) 11:13, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • "J.S. Ryan" (in Personality section) space "J." and "S."
      Done. Cla68 (talk) 11:15, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Is the "University of New England" University of New England (Australia)?
      Yes. Linked in the article. Cla68 (talk) 11:15, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    Everything's duly reffed with inline cites, but there are some inconsistencies in the cites:
    • cite 40: Who or what is "RT"?
      Fixed. Cla68 (talk) 12:21, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • cite 49: Which Ryan is this?
      Fixed. Cla68 (talk) 12:24, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • For consistency's sake, if you are going to date the Ryan cites, it's probably best to date the Leng, Jordan, etc. ones, too.
      Done. Cla68 (talk) 12:35, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Leng should be Leng & McClymont, shouldn't it?
      Done. Cla68 (talk) 12:42, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • In the "References" section, if Leng is surname first, then so should McClymont be. Ditto Warren Newman.
      Done. Cla68 (talk) 12:45, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      Everything looks fine to me now. Curly Turkey (gobble) 23:12, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    C. No original research:
    As far as I can tell. I can't access all of the sources.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    As far as I'm aware
    B. Focused:
    The article seems to get to the point very well.
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    I'm not an expert on the subject, but I can detect no obvious bias.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
    No images at all. Are there no pictures of the man that could be used with a Fair Use Rationale? No photos of the university?
    • I added a photo of the university and of one of his awards. I don't have any photos of him that are decent enough quality to upload under a fair use license and I haven't found any public domain images. I'm still looking but it may take awhile. Cla68 (talk) 12:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      The images look fine, and the licences check out. If you're planning on taking this article farther I'd recommend adding WP:ALTTEXT to the images. Curly Turkey (gobble) 23:12, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
I have fixed some of your suggestions. This is the first time I have seen the article and thought I would help out. Michael73072 (talk) 04:42, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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