Talk:Green Lantern (Six Flags Great Adventure)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- Infobox has inconsistent commas for 1000s (or 1,000s).
- One very short para for the lead could be improved, it's supposed to summarise the article - my rule of thumb: check it against the table of contents, have you summarised the article in the lead?
- "Bolliger & Mabillard stand-up roller coaster" three links without unlinked words between is confusing to a reader. It's a hard call but can you rephrase it?
- Is there a suitable link for "inversions" for non-expert readers?
- "About 1999, its track " -> "Around 1999, its..."
- " early 2006" hyphen.
- "track returned to its " perhaps "track was returned" as it didn't do it itself.
- "(as confirmed by local media)" is that needed?
- Don't overlink Six Flags.
- What is "zoning approval"?
- "The ride is located ..." reiterate the name.
- What is B&M?
- Link Riddler's Revenge first time round.
- " peaked at #47" avoid hash for number per WP:HASH. Check others.
- Don't SHOUT in the refs.
- Check refs for correct use of en-dash in the title fields.
The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
GAN criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Not far from decent, so I'll put it on hold for seven days. Let me know when you're ready for a re-assessment. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I believe I have addressed all the issues. Themeparkgc Talk 00:01, 23 July 2013 (UTC)