Talk:Green Lantern (film)/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:50, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Lede: "critics" should be "media critics"
That's pretty much it. On hold. TBrandley 18:50, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- "In a post-credits scene, Sinestro steals the yellow ring and places it on his finger, causing his green suit and eyes to change to yellow." merge with the other sentence
- "Green Lantern (film)" should just have the real title in the quote box in "External links"
- Ref. 102 is a bare reference
- I think "Release" is way small
- Zimbo isn't a good source
- Don't shout in ref. titles
- Ref. 20 should be work instead of publisher
Other than that, were good! TBrandley 03:08, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the notice! I've been a little busy for the past few days, but I'll try to get these taken care of here soon. Let's say Monday or Tuesday at the latest. Hope that's okay. Evanh2008 (talk|contribs) 04:00, 12 August 2012 (UTC)