Talk:Grift of the Magi/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add actors for various. Example: Bart's actor is missing
- No other Simpsons episode articles list the actors. And since it's not required by any policy I don't think the actors should be added in this article either. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink showrunner per WP:OVERLINK
- This is not a common term. "animated" and "sitcom" are far more common. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Only Fox should be linked, not network
Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
ABC should be American Broadcasting Company (ABC) per MOS:ACRO
Add its first mention, it should only show the last name for "Mike Scully" which should be "Scully", etc.
"Actor" is not needed in that image
Perhaps move the image to the left, as there is already one directly above it
- I'd prefer not. See second paragraph of Wikipedia:Images#Location. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref. 2: That - should be an en-dash as per WP:DASH
Ref. 2: Yahoo! is the publisher, and Yahoo! TV is the work
Ref. 4: Is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
- Since when is this needed? See Wikipedia:Cite#Webpages. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Various other ref. are also missing publishers
- See above. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add "television" portal in that box
- Why? It adds nothing to this article and would cause a whitespace at the bottom of the article. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add TV.com link for the episode
Categories should be in alphabetical order please.

Good work. On hold for now. TBran dl ey 19:47, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I have fixed everything except for the stuff I have commented on. Theleftorium ^(talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]