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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lede
  • Link animated
  • Link sitcom
  • Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
  • Add actor for Fat Tony
  • Add actor for Skinner
  • Add actor for Bart
  • Add actor for Lisa
Plot
  • Add actors for various. Example: Bart's actor is missing
    • No other Simpsons episode articles list the actors. And since it's not required by any policy I don't think the actors should be added in this article either. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production
Release
  • Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
  • ABC should be American Broadcasting Company (ABC) per MOS:ACRO
  • Add its first mention, it should only show the last name for "Mike Scully" which should be "Scully", etc.
  • "Actor" is not needed in that image
  • Perhaps move the image to the left, as there is already one directly above it
References
External links
  • Add "television" portal in that box
    • Why? It adds nothing to this article and would cause a whitespace at the bottom of the article. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add TV.com link for the episode
  • Categories should be in alphabetical order please.

Good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 19:47, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for the review! I have fixed everything except for the stuff I have commented on. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]