Talk:Guilty as Sin?/GA1

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 14:06, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 17:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

• "showing that the narrator is aware of how the public perceives her for this fling" → a little informal
• "The song features a reference to the Scottish band the Blue Nile..." → what is the reference?
• "Within ten days of the album's release, the vinyl stock of all four of the Blue Nile's albums were sold out on their website" → this might be unnecessary detail
• "SLUG Magazine's Palak Jayswal named it one of the album's best songs" → wrong citation given
• "and Anna Leszkiewicz similarly picked it as a "couple of bright pop tracks shine through the fog"" → who is Anna Leszkiewicz; this isn't grammatically correct
• the studios and track length are given in the infobox but not the body

Heartfox (talk) 17:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)