Jump to content

Talk:HD 154672

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Good articleHD 154672 has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 5, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

[edit]
This review is transcluded from Talk:HD 154672/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk contribs count) 18:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "It is about 65 parsecs away from the Sun that is larger, but of a similar mass, as the Sun; it is, however, much older." and is larger; confusing as worded now.
  • "Originally, HD 154672 was flagged as home to such a short-orbit "Hot Jupiter,"" the 'such a' part throws the sentence off, not positive what it's trying to say.
  • "HD 143672, however, is far" rm however here, was getting a bit overused.

Article will be put on hold and passed when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]