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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 20:22, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Grabbing this for a review. Miyagawa (talk) 20:22, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Description: I'm being really picky, but I'm getting worried this might be a straight pass! :) - link "anti-aircraft armament" to Anti-aircraft warfare
    • Good idea.
  • Construction and career: You've linked to Naval Base Simon's Town on the second occasion it is mentioned.
    • You sure? I'm only seeing it once, although there a mention of Simon's Town at the end of the previous para.
  • Change "It was obsolete by 1972 and was taken out of service on 15 March." to start with "Natal" instead of "It", only because you mentioned another ship more recently. I didn't find it particularly confusing, but some might.
    • Agreed.

That's the lot. Nice job, and a ship with an interesting history. Never heard of one sinking an enemy submarine while being worked up before! That can't be all that common, I'd think. Miyagawa (talk) 20:33, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think it is, especially only hours out of the shipyard. Only thing that would be even more exceptional would be to sink one on trials, but I can't remember if that's ever happened. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:17, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]