Talk:HMS Glenmore (1796)
![]() | HMS Glenmore (1796) is currently a Warfare good article nominee. Nominated by Ykraps (talk) at 10:20, 1 June 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: British sailing frigate 1796–1814 |
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Nominator: Ykraps (talk · contribs) 10:20, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 13:42, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 13:42, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I look forward to hearing your comments. --Ykraps (talk) 16:51, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: are you coming back to this? --Ykraps (talk) 18:34, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, just a busy time at work right now. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:47, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Prelim[edit]
- No duplicated links
- Image correctly licensed
- Article is stable
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox[edit]
- Suggest adding the number of guns in the first line of the lede, e.g. "36-gun Amazon-class frigate"
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Link 18-pounder long gun in lede and infobox
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- You switch between using "pounder" and "pdr", suggest only using one version for consistency throughout the article
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 19:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Suggest "Amiable drove off"
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Link truss
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Considering the size of the article I think that the lede is a tad long. The final paragraph on the mutiny could be shortened to provide slightly less detail on, for example, the exact disciplined meted out
- I've trimmed a bit but I'm keen to keep it a full summary of the article. --Ykraps (talk) 19:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Probably worth mentioning the French Revolutionary Wars early in the lede just to make it very obvious what we're relating the Peace of Amiens to
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:37, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- I believe it's normal to link the "in" in "in ordinary" as well (phew, that's a lot of ins!)
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:37, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- The date of order is only mentioned in the lede, not in main text
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 18:37, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Ibid John Tovey, launch date
- Added launch date to main body. John Tovey? --Ykraps (talk) 19:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- You have John Tovey as the master shipwright in the infobox but he isn't mentioned in main text. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 20:40, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Added. --Ykraps (talk) 05:08, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- Give the exact date of sale in the lede, as you do have it
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 19:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Remove trailing zeros in measurements, e.g. 143 ft 0 in (43.6 m) becomes 143 ft (43.6 m)
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 19:12, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Add spaces after the colons in the infobox
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 19:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Link keel and gundeck in infobox
- Done. --Ykraps (talk) 19:12, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi @Pickersgill-Cunliffe:, Do you have anything else to add? --Ykraps (talk) 07:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
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