Talk:HMS Iron Duke (1912)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:55, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'd use Portsmouth Dockyard with a redirect to HMNB Portsmouth as that was the contemporary title.
  • You might want to add a "|0" to your conversion templates to make them round properly.
  • What's a cwt? You'll find a useful note to that effect on many of my British articles.
  • Clarify that only the ship's secondary armament was removed. Only five of these were used for the defenses of Scapa according to the Osprey book on Scapa.
  • No duplicate links, no DABs, external links OK.
  • Pictures appropriately licensed.
  • Glad to see that you used Halpern, I was going to suggest it if you hadn't known about it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:55, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Should all be taken care of. And yeah, I had used Halpern in the past with some of the French pre-dreadnoughts that wound up in the Black Sea after the war. Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 21:23, 16 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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