Talk:HMS Mars (1896)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:06, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

I'll get started on this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:06, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs or external links.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Need |ship power line with ihp and number of boilers
  • Added
• Use the link I gave you for the VTE engines in both the infobox and main body.
  • Done
• Watch your conversions and probably a digit too many in the infobox
  • Yeah, 4 sigfigs is a wee bit excessive. I didn't notice that when I overhauled the box.
• Just a suggestion, but you could streamline the torpedo tube data.
  • In the box? Sounds fine to me.
• Link cylindrical boilers, depot ship.
  • Done
• During her refit, the Channel Fleet became a new Atlantic Fleet in a reorganization on 1 January 1905, she became a unit of the Atlantic Fleet. This is awkward.
  • See if it reads better now.
• now mounted on monitor Sir Thomas Picton Awkward, we already know that Picton is a monitor.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:28, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Good point, removed. Parsecboy (talk) 21:00, 5 August 2015 (UTC)