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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Menace (1915)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Image appropriately licensed
  • Link launched in the lede
    • Added link.
  • but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
    • Moved.
  • It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
    • Amended.
  • What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
    • Clarified.
  • Add the sale date to the infobox
    • Added.
  • comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Clarified.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]