Talk:HMS Penelope (1867)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:56, 22 April 2016 (UTC)
Will do this soon. JAGUAR 20:56, 22 April 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments[edit]
- "Penelope was mobilized as tensions with Russia rose" - mobilised
- "She carried a maximum of 500 long tons (510 t) of coal" - tonnes? I think 'tonne' is British spelling (I've always used it) but I don't know if ton or tonne had different meanings back in those days...
<puzzled>No difference, but I can't get the template to use British spelling for the life of me, even though that's supposed to be the default. I'm gonna have to ask about that.
- "She was part of the Particular Service Squadron mobilized during the Russian war scare" - mobilised
- "The ship was laid down on 4 September" - this needs a year
- See prior sentence
- "she was at Gibraltar on the summer cruise when the Anglo-Egyptian War" - link Anglo-Egyptian War
- Linked in lede.
- No dead links (correction, no links)
- No dab links
Very good article, as usual. On hold until all are clarified. Interested to know the real difference between 'tons' and tonnes'! JAGUAR 21:08, 22 April 2016 (UTC) Thanks for reviewing all these; I think that you'll be ready to start writing some of your own by the time the contest ends!