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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Rattlesnake (1910)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:18, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Images appropriately licensed
  • Abbreviate nautical miles in the infobox
    • Done.
  • link long tons, direct drive and shaft horsepower
    • Linked.
  • What did the boilers feed the turbines?
    • Steam. I've added a bit to the sentence that I hope helps clarify this.
  • Three digits to the right of the decimal point seems a bit excessive
    • I know. It is what the source says.
  • Kabatepe. turning the ship's is this supposed to be a comma?
    • Fixed.
  • Any word on activities in 1916?
    • There is nothing in the sources about Rattlesnake explicitly but I have added something generic based on the flotilla's activity.
  • at Hampton Roads and via missing comma
    • Reworded sentence to make it more clear.
  • Hargreaves and Moore not used
    • Removed.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 01:24, 10 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]