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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:16, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:16, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links OK
  • File:Sir John Gore.jpeg needs a British license
  • All other images properly licensed
  • Hyphen for fifth rate
  • Policy is not to cite data in the infobox if it's covered in the main body.
  • Drop trailing zeros in conversions
  • Fix the link to weatherly ship so that it actually links to the term
  • with Triton involving herself more in close blockade work than in earlier years Rephrase, she had about a year's service by this point!
  • More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:26, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tell the reader what type of ship each British ship is on first mention. Generalities suffice as the reader can look them up to see each one's rating if curious.
  • Suggest add a period at the end of the title in the bibliography to help separate it from the publisher's location.
  • Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:06, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    Hi, thanks very much for doing this! I believe I have made all the corrections you listed here, but would appreciate it if you could check the File:Sir John Gore.jpeg, I am still not too sure I've done that correctly. Thanks again, Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 00:26, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • One small correction to the image licensing that you added, but it should be good to go now. You did a nice job here; I hope you do more of these type of articles. Just remember to avoid the sorts of things that needed to be corrected here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:03, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]