Talk:HMS Vigilant (1777)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 12:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC) Hi,
- Will do in the next day or two. Regards, MathewTownsend (talk) 12:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
- review
- Really very good, with everything in place. Well written. Just a few nitpicks:
- "and she had a beam of 36 ft (11.0 m)" why not "with a bean of 36 ft ..." - "had" makes it sound her bean length changed, whereas the article doesn't clarify if measurement errors accounted for the difference.
- "She was then survey" > surveyed?
- "sometime during the year" > that year?
- That's all for now. Well done!
MathewTownsend (talk) 20:50, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Good suggestions, all done. Thanks for the review.
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
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- Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
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