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Good articleHMS Vigilant (1777) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
June 25, 2012Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Vigilant (1777)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 12:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC) Hi,[reply]

review
  • Really very good, with everything in place. Well written. Just a few nitpicks:
  • "and she had a beam of 36 ft (11.0 m)" why not "with a bean of 36 ft ..." - "had" makes it sound her bean length changed, whereas the article doesn't clarify if measurement errors accounted for the difference.
  • "She was then survey" > surveyed?
  • "sometime during the year" > that year?
  • That's all for now. Well done!

MathewTownsend (talk) 20:50, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good suggestions, all done. Thanks for the review.

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
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  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
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  4. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
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  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
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