Talk:Har Mar Mall/GA2

GA Reassessment[edit]

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Yet another Carbrera article on a shopping mall in Minnesota.

Intro is full of list cruft. Most of the stores mentioned in the intro are not mentioned elsewhere and do not seem notable on their own.

One article source is Cinema Treasures, which is a user submitted directory. Another is a blogspot page. Neither is a RS.

The Explore Minnesota link is 404 and seems to be a directory listing that has no relevance anyway.

"it features massively wide hallways" - cite this quote

"summer of 1962" - WP:SEASON

Way too monotone in sentence structure. Everything is "In X, Y happened. In Z, A happened."

The entire article is only one section. Surely there is more to say about the changes in stores and renovations? Look at how much material I got out of Swifton Center, and that mall died in the 80s.

tl;dr there's a lot to work on here. As @Carbrera: seemed to ignore the last GAN, I think this one is bound for delisting. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 01:03, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@TenPoundHammer: Are you ready to close this? 18:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Aircorn: Yeah, I think this one can be delisted now. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 23:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Sweet. Do you want me to do it? Aircorn (talk) 04:19, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Aircorn: if you'd like. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 21:36, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - Ok. Aircorn (talk) 14:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]