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Reviewer: --Legolas (talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)
Hello. I will be reviewing this article for the GA criterias. First of all I will be reviewing against quick-fail criterias.
Prose[edit]
Verifiability[edit]
Check for disambiguation and other dubious wikilinks[edit]
- Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:23, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
Links validity check[edit]
- per this. The link from The Guardian changes path. Needs to be replaced with original link. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:28, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
GA review[edit]
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Remove reference 4 to Rotten Tomatoes, those are by users and not professional. Done
- Reference 21, please make the [] brackets as {}. Then the reference won't be broken. Done
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- The image HollabackGirl.jpg needs to be made right as per MOS:IMAGES. Also please add alternate text for the images as per WP:ALT.
- Done both. The alt text on hollabackgirl was broken.
- Mmmmm still not exactly satisfied with the alt text. Expecially the two performance pictures doesnot give any info other than the blond lady singing in the microphone. Try Sticky & Sweet Tour and check how they added the alternate text. --Legolas (talk2me) 05:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
- How is that? I didn't know alt-text was supposed to be so detailed. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:47, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
- Mmmmm still not exactly satisfied with the alt text. Expecially the two performance pictures doesnot give any info other than the blond lady singing in the microphone. Try Sticky & Sweet Tour and check how they added the alternate text. --Legolas (talk2me) 05:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
- Done both. The alt text on hollabackgirl was broken.
- The image HollabackGirl.jpg needs to be made right as per MOS:IMAGES. Also please add alternate text for the images as per WP:ALT.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Over all a good article. We are almost there. --Legolas (talk2me) 09:56, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed what you brought up. Thanks for the review. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:29, 23 November 2009 (UTC)