Talk:Harvard Extension School/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:04, 15 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:04, 15 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs
The external links checker in the toolbox shows lots of dead links.
Images appropriately licensed.
Link graduate, undergraduate, liberal arts, degree, continuing education, Yonkers, professor, Old South Meeting House, Lowell Institute, I-20, F-1 visa, commencement address
Standardize name format for Lowell on how he actually used his name and full name only used on first use, last name thereafter.
Despite falling revenue due to the Great Depression, A. Lawrence Lowell insisted in 1931 that the will of John Lowell, Jr prevented courses from costing more than two bushels of wheat. As a result, a half year course cost could no more than $5, and a full course no more than $10.[15] Some courses cost as little as $2.50. Did the will, presumably of the father, fund the extension school? If so, explain this.
Commission faculties What commission, what faculties?
Move link for Boston University to first use in the second para of the history secton,
Harvard Extension School offers more than six-hundred on-campus and online courses,[31] taught by both Harvard faculty and instructors from the Greater Boston community.[32] Harvard Extension School awkward, rephrase the beginning of the second sentence.
asynchronous online platforms explain this by giving examples and rephrase to simpler, non-jargony English.
In addition to the Dean's Prize for Outstanding ALM Thesis, there are four other major academic prizes — the Phelps, Crite, Langlois, and Small prizes — as well as the Aurelio, Yang, and Wood prizes Explain these other prizes.
home schooled teenager put a hyphen between home and schooled as it's a compound adjective.
2,000 employee clarify, employees of what? The university?
Be consistent about putting your article titles in title case or not.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:44, 25 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]