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Good articleHasta Que Me Olvides has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 3, 2023Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 17, 2023.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Luis Miguel's chance meeting with Juan Luis Guerra led to Guerra writing the song "Hasta Que Me Olvides" on a napkin?

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Hasta Que Me Olvides/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:23, 1 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will complete this today, happy new year! --K. Peake 10:23, 1 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • The recording date is not sourced for the second infobox and why is Juan Luis Guerra not wikilinked?
  • Write out the composers and producers in the body
  • "handling the track's production." → "handling the production."
  • Swap the release and ballad sentences
  • ""Hasta Que Me Olvides" was released as" → "It was released as"
  • "who listed it among his" → "who listed it among Miguel's" and shouldn't there be a comma before who?
  • Remove redundant capitalisation for Latin AWard and add the year 1995

Background and composition

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  • "led to Guerra composing" → "led to him composing" on the img text
  • The 1940s part is not sourced
  • Pipe certified gold to Music recording certification
  • Remove El Siglo de Torreón Mexican newspaper introduction
  • Wikilink as cover versions instead
  • Shouldn't you mention the title of the album in the second para?
  • "in Mexico, led to Guerra" → "in Mexico led to him"

Promotion and reception

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  • Mention it was the album's second single per this being a new section
  • Remove the comma before El Concierto
  • Mention it was released as a promo single that same year
  • "La Prensa de San Antonio Diana Raquel commended" → "La Prensa de San Antonio author Diana Raquel commended"
  • End the speech marks at YouTube Music
  • "becoming his ninth number one" → "becoming Miguel's ninth number one"

Personnel

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Charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk20:13, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Improved to Good Article status by Magiciandude (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 20:14, 5 January 2023 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - the current hook doesn't explicitly state it was Guerra who wrote the song
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Onegreatjoke: Article is long enough and has been promoted to GA on Jan 3 and nominated in time. It is neutral, inline citations exist, and copyvio flags a vendor site which copied the first paragraph twice. The hook is long enough, interesting, and sourced and I'll AGF on the source. A QPQ has been provided. The hook needs a bit of tweaking, as the "led to him" bit could refer to either Miguel or Guerra. Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:31, 8 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Sebbirrrr: how about that Luis Miguel's chance meeting with Juan Luis Guerra led to Juan writing the song "Hasta Que Me Olvides" in a napkin?" Onegreatjoke (talk) 15:06, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Onegreatjoke: I've gone ahead and replaced "him" with Guerra per MOS:SURNAME. Good to go now! Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:44, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]