Talk:Heart Attack (Noizy song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
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I am reunited with you for this review! --K. Peake 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]Only keep dance and hip hop in the infobox, per the others only being sourced as elements"Musically, it is an" → "It is an""Its lyrics explore a" → "The lyrics explore a""and peaked at" → "while peaking at"
Background and composition
[edit]"Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "Heart Attack" is an"- Where is the dance genre sourced?
- Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
"to have his significant other" → the source mentions "all to himself", so reword to add something similar
Reception
[edit]"received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"songtexte.de should not be italicisedhiphop.de should not be italicised"deemed it an" → "deemed the song an"laut.de should not be italicisedThe laut.de ref appears to source animates instead of motivates and the calm down part says "Only Loredana manages to slow him down", per my translator"including number three in" → "reaching number three in"[13][14][15] should be ordered to correspond with the countries listed
Music video
[edit]- Img looks good!
- "before a petrol station" are you sure this is appropriate terminology?
- Do you have a suggestion? Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
"in the city of Durrës, Albania, and along" → "in Durrës and along"
Charts
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks incredible at 4.8%!!!!
Fix citations 1, 2 and 4 for ref 1 since the titles are different from what you have wrote them as here- What exactly makes ref 4 a reliable source?
- Replaced by a new source. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 17
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went reasonably quick! --K. Peake 09:09, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
- Hello Kyle Peake hope you're having a good summer. I've responded to all of the issues with few comments from my side. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:08, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- Iaof2017 ✓ Pass now and for the gas station part, I used next to instead. --K. Peake 06:31, 26 July 2022 (UTC)