Talk:Heavy Crown (song)/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- Shouldn't a release date be included in here? Including the date of the reissued album would be fine by me
Done
- I don't know how it's exactly credited in the liner notes, but would you credit The Invisible Men as writers, or the three men that make up the trio?
- I'm inclined to credit them as the trio, like how it's presented in the liner notes of the album. The same way that I've credited 'Iggy Azalea', not 'Amythest Kelly'.
Lead[edit]
- I didn't find any mistakes, but could the lead be broken into two smaller paragraphs? It's matter of personal preference I guess
Done
Background[edit]
- The first sentence's use of 'which' sounds a bit redundant; could this possibly be reworded?
Done
- You could remove 'also' in the sentence that begins with: "On 14 November..."
Done
Composition[edit]
Looks very good to me; nothing to change here :)
Critical reception[edit]
Paragraph 2[edit]
- Would you link Idolator here? Probably not, since it was linked in the composition section...
- Yeah, I'm a one link-per article kinda editor.
References[edit]
I double checked each source to see if any had the overlinking (like you mentioned on Baby Don't Lie's article) and everything looked fantastic
- Thankyou!
- Thankyou!
GA[edit]
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Put on hold
End of GA Review:[edit]
I definitely think this article should pass GA; I don't see anything wrong with it. You've outdone yourself on this article, but I would like you to see what I had to say before passing it. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 23:26, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thankyou for your comments and kind words, I've addressed your concerns above. Azealia911 talk 07:50, 5 March 2016 (UTC)