Talk:Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball)

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Let me return you a favor by reviewing your article. Thanks for all the copy edit. This may take some days.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • Needs to include about how Friedrich became disabled.
    • No. There's a rule about not focusing on disabilities. So that information should not go in the lead. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Needs to include her place of birth.
  • It was also runner-up - it?
    • The team. "It" is the correct pronoun. Changed to "The team". Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

  • wikilink Holger Glinicki
  • Perhaps update all her medals from the Achievements section in the "Medal Record" section. (It looks like she won more than two medals)

Biography[edit]

  • Might want to divide it into sections.
  • Needs to include something about her coach.
  • wikilink "Silver Laurel Leaf"
  • by a point should be by one point

Achievements[edit]

  • Wikilink the events if possible.
    • They are linked earlier in the article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Awards[edit]

  • Wikilink if possible.

Images[edit]

  • Explain in more detail about the infobox image.
    • What do you want to know? Laura took it at the Gliders and Rollers World Challenge in Sydney in July 2012. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Make the infobox image smaller maybe. (Although not necessary.) It's just taking away some space.
    • Using the default size. Don't was to fix it at a specified size because that may cause problems for people with mobile devices. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Other[edit]

  • ref 5 is a dead link.
    • Aaargh. To be expected I suppose. Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • You may want to look at some reviews for ref 8. The info should be okay but there may be possible malware. [1]
    • How strange. The link points to here. Check your machine. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

That's basically all what I can find. TheQ Editor (Talk) 00:22, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • All points addressed. Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Nice, I've helped you specified the image caption, now it's a GA.

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