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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 00:50, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


The primary thing here is lead expansion. More should be mentioned upfront about his dissent and other parliamentary activities.

  • Added "In the 2000s he formed his own party, the Union Congolaise pour la Liberté. Though officially allied with President Joseph Kabila in Parliament through a coalition, Lokondo has frequently contradicted the bloc's positions in favor of his own party's stances."


"He earned a degree in political science with a focus in international relations from the Université libre de Bruxelles." Poli-sci can be wikilinked

  • Done


" Lokondo then worked in the Congolese government's intelligence services in Uvira." Is there an article for the Congolese MI6 equivalent?


"Conference Nationale Souveraine" A backdrop for this would be nice

  • "the Conference Nationale Souveraine—a national convention that discussed democratisation and political reform"


Kinshasa should be wikilinked once as well

  • Done


"Lokondo went into exile in Belgium though several months later he returned under Laurent-Désiré Kabila's regime..." Comma after Belgium

  • Done


"On 8 November he vacated his seat in the Assembly." 2004 I assume?

  • Yes, I figured this didn't need any clarification because of the preceding sentence.


All the rest seems fine. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:50, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@QatarStarsLeague: I've responded to all comments, and I've added a little contextual information to the article. -Indy beetle (talk) 03:30, 23 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I've reset the review parameter to request a new reviewer, as it appears this review has been abandoned. -Indy beetle (talk) 18:39, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]