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Reviewer: CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk · contribs) 06:26, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this soon. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 06:26, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
Credits adapted from Bollywood Hungama [2]
  • In the plot section first sentence includes Khan's full credit name but not for Qamar.
  • interviewed for the admission → interviewed for admission
  • himself hit by a SUV to extort → himself hit by an SUV to extort
  • what is SUV? Car?
  • send Piya to the government run Hindi Medium → government-run
  • got his daughter's admission through the Right To Education (RTE) quota | linking Right To Education (RTE) would be useful.
  • Made on a moderate budget → actual budget would be nice
  • after romantic comedy films Pyaar Ke Side Effects (2006) and Shaadi Ke Side Effects. Chaudhary came → when was Shaadi Ke Side Effects released.
    •  Not done Already mentioned the release date and link in the lead section.
  • Need a better picture of Irrfan Khan which includes his headshot.
  • Mustafa Stationwala—they are film editor A. Sreekar Prasad → linking A. Sreekar Prasad would remove some confusion
    •  Not done Already linked in the lead section.
  • famous Old Delhi precinct → link Old Delhi
  • "Qamar flew to Mumbai from Pakistan in July 2016 and the film's principal photography began in the same month. The film was shot in actual locations Chandni Chowk, Anand Lok, Karol Bagh and Sangam Vihar" → Source?
  • The shooting was completed in October 2016 — Source?
    •  Not done Source no. 13
      • Mr. Smart LION: the source does not talk about shooting being completed in October 2016. It mentions "she was shooting for her Bollywood debut film, Saket Chaudhry's Hindi Medium" source
  • emerged as a sleeper hit at the box office → source proving that.
  • At top of Sequel section add {{main article|Angrezi Medium}}
  • Add Template:Filmfare Award for Best Film.
  • people Chaudhary had worked with in → within
  • topic grave, but found that the script has been → remove the comma
  • cool as a couple on screen → on-screen
  • The entire unit of Hindi Medium, including Irrfan and Saba, who look cool as a couple → Italic film name
Further comments
Promoting.~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 09:28, 21 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]