Talk:Horizon (Star Trek: Enterprise)/GA1
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 12:40, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
- No DAB links, no dead links
- What makes TrekWeb.com a reliable resource? Other than that I'm OK with the sources presented.
- TrekWeb is one of the oldest ongoing Star Trek websites, having been created in 1996. Its founder and editor Steve Krutzler is used on occasion as a Star Trek subject expert, such as in a Time magazine article here. It is one of only four fan produced websites endorsed by the Official Star Trek website here. Miyagawa (talk) 14:03, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
- Critical response was mixed, and the episode received the lowest ratings for a first-run episode of the series so far, having been viewed by 3.36 million viewers. I think you can remove the "having been" and be no worse off. Does this include season one?
- At the direction of Starfleet, the Enterprise makes a 30 light-year detour to a planet passing between two gas planets as the gravitational forces on the planet should cause heavy volcanic activity. too many planets, I would change "two gas planets" to "two gas giants" and maybe link.
- Travis identifies that the device would explode if they try to remove it, and it is revealed that this follows the pattern of other attacks on cargo vessels nearby I don't understand this sentence.
- What relevance does the third paragraph bear on the plot?
- Reference 2 uses European dating while all the others use American.