Talk:Hua Guofeng's cult of personality/GA1

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Nominator: Karkafs Desiderium (talk · contribs) 10:27, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk · contribs) This looks interesting. 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	"was the attempted cult of personality of Hua Guofeng, who became the second Chairman of the Chinese Communist Party from 1976 until 1981, after the death of former Chairman Mao Zedong." This setence is a bit long and I feel like it could be split up for better readibility. CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply] "When the founder of the People's Republic of China and first Chairman of the Chinese Communist Party, Mao Zedong, died in 1976 his newly appointed successor, Hua Guofeng, was relatively unknown to the public at the start of his rule." This sentence is again a bit too long and could be reworded. CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	While I'm not going to fail you for this, is it possible that you could add an infobox to the article? I'm not sure if there is a cult infobox but I will look into that. CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Great use of images in the article! CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 05:41, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
	7. Overall assessment.