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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Add alt text to every image in this article.
  • "In common usage the word" → "In common usage, the word"
  • "2.8 million year old" → "2.8 million-year-old"
  • Remove the comma after "branched progression".
  • "In the 5th century BCE history" → "In the 5th century BCE, history"
  • "In Africa the Kingdom" → "In Africa, the Kingdom"
  • "In West Asia the Achaemenid Empire" → "In West Asia, the Achaemenid Empire"
  • Add a comma after "the fall of the Western Roman Empire in 476".
  • Add a comma after "this same time period".
  • "super powers" should be written as one word (see article).
  • "early 1800's" → "early 1800s"
  • "enhancing exchange of resources" → "enhancing the exchange of resources"
  • "Through invention humans" → "Through invention, humans"
  • "overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels has" → "overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels have"
  • Remove the comma after "in some individuals".
  • "Through history human populations" → "Throughout history, human populations"
  • "body weight and body type is" → "body weight and body type are"
  • Add a comma after "the 23 pairs of chromosomes".
  • "hundreds of thousand" → "hundreds of thousands"
  • "harbour" and "labour" → "harbor" and "labor" (consistency)
  • "which are private" → "that are private"
  • Remove the comma after "development in the human".
  • Add a comma after "in developing countries".
  • "to a painful labor" → "to painful labor"
  • Remove the comma after "time periods".
  • Add commas after "for example" (both times).
  • "Central African Republic" → "the Central African Republic"
  • Add a comma after "the developing world".
  • Remove the comma after "in human culture".
  • "and the way in which they are prepared" → "and how they are prepared"
  • "more lower" → "lower"
  • Add a hyphen between "chromosome related".
  • "debate over what extent" → "debate over to what extent"
  • "processing of the things in experience" - reword
  • "the mental processes'" → "the mental processes"
  • "which can be defined" → "that can be defined"
  • Add a comma after "in which case".
  • "behavioural" and "practised" → "behavioral" and "practiced" (consistency)
  • "as of quality" - reword
  • Resolve the [better source needed] tag.
  • "all the diverse human societies" → "all diverse human societies"
  • Remove the comma after "locally occurring".
  • Is "auditively" a word?
  • "Art is a defining characteristics" → "Art is a defining characteristic"
  • Is "musics" a word?
  • "humans musical abilities" → "humans' musical abilities"
  • "synchronised" → "synchronized"
  • "30,000 year old" → "30,000-year-old"
  • "humans capabilities" → "humans' capabilities"
  • "species of animal" → "species of animals"
  • "In many societies it is" → "In many societies, it is"
  • "social organizing principle" → "social organizing principles"
  • "who identify" → "that identifies"
  • "Also there is no" → "Also, there is no"
  • "on what" → "of what"
  • "ethno-political" → "ethnopolitical"
  • "obtaining power and ability" → "obtaining power and the ability"
  • Optional for this article but try to archive references.
Thanks for the review. Will work through these. Aircorn (talk) 00:07, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, life got in the way. Many of these were done by other editors while I was away. I have made the other changes or have left a comment above. Thanks for reading the article and your useful review. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]