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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 14:29, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 14:29, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • "The nascent storm eventually peaked as a 105 mph (165 km/h) Category 2 hurricane on the Saffir–Simpson scale as it began to move southwestward. However, land interaction began to weaken the hurricane as it approached the Gulf Coast of Mexico. Early on September 9, Katia made landfall near Tecolutla as a minimal hurricane." that's four "as"'s in 3 sentences. Probably could substitute a "with winds of 105 mph (165 km/h), making Katia a" or a "while" in here.
  • "Tourists left coastal towns, emergency shelters were opened, and storm drains were cleared before the onset of heavy rainfall.[12] " happens in every storm. Probably not worth mentioning unless you have an exact total. YE Pacific Hurricane 21:05, 3 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The highest 24-hour rainfall total in relation to the hurricane was 11 in (280 mm) in Canseco, Veracruz.[1] while several roads were closed due to inundation." this seems like the kind of mistake I would make. YE Pacific Hurricane 21:05, 3 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]