Talk:Hurricane Marco (2020)/GA1
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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 05:26, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
Grabbing this review
Images[edit]
- All the rights are in order.
- Captions look good
- Minor MOS:SANDWICH issue
Copy-vios[edit]
- Nothing exciting
- Earwig only flags simple phrases and proper nouns
Sourcing[edit]
- FN 1 and FN 3 are duplicates
- No concerns about reliability.
- All links are either live or archived
Misc[edit]
- Minor vandalism in May, but page is currently stable.
- Nominator is primary author
Prose[edit]
was the first of two tropical cyclones to threaten the Gulf Coast of the United States within a three-day period, with the other being Hurricane Laura.
The thirteenth named storm and third hurricane of the record-breaking 2020 Atlantic hurricane season...
Due to strong wind shear...
Split sentence
- Why is the formed date listed as "August 20, 2020", there is nothing in the body to support this
Shortly after being named, Marco continued to contradict the forecasts and followed a more northerly course
As it was a small system...
reorder sentence, hard to follow
- 'Relentless ' WP:PUFFERY
but that was changed in post-storm analysis.
What was it changed to?
- "Tropical Depression Fourteen" why is it designated at 13th somewhere else, more clarification is needed
- "600 additional resources"
this was more than twice the average August rainfall of 9.1 in (231 mm)
awkward wording
Despite this, the NHC did not attribute Marco to any deaths in their post-storm report
why?
- Unfortunately, there's no reason why. The tropical cyclone report the National Hurricane Center released for Marco did not mention the indirect death, therefore the reason is unknown. Numerous sources did state that there was a death connected to the tropical cyclone, however. Tails Wx 16:26, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
there was flooding due to the growth of rivers that come from mountains nearby
awkward wording
However, heavy rainfall
Cut however, repetitive wording
Comment: The prose is a little awkward, but otherwise the page is close to GA status. Kicking it back to you. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 05:26, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- @Tails Wx That appears to be everything, I made a second pass of the article and made some minor prose modifications, please review them when you can. While ALT text is highly recommended, it is not an explicit GA criteria. At this time the article passes, congrats on another GA!!! 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 21:47, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
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