Talk:Hyderabad/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 15:40, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"by the sobriquet City of Pearls" - Shouldn’t that be "Sobriquet"?

I have asked at the help desk regarding this. I am not really sure, and WP:MOSCAPS does not help much. X.One ^SOS 09:35, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia:Help desk#Capitals. Sufficient? X.One ^SOS 12:43, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Historical records says that" ----> "Historical records say that"

Done. :)--Omer123hussain (talk) 08:36, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"one of the world's richest man in 1937." ----> "one of the world's richest men in 1937."

Done :)--Omer123hussain (talk) 08:41, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Musi river, of which Purana pul is the oldest.[40] Osman Sagarand Himayat Sagar are dams built over the Musi river." - Capital "R" on "river"

Done.--Omer123hussain (talk) 23:32, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Osman Sagar and Himayat Sagar are dams built over the Musi river." Unsourced

Added source from here.--Omer123hussain (talk) 23:32, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Hyderabad has a combination of a tropical wet and dry climate (Köppen Aw) that borders on a hot semi-arid climate ( Köppen BSh). The climate remains fairly warm and does not receive much rainfall in the monsoon. With the onset of winters in northern and central India, temperatures marginally decrease in December and January and the nights become cool in and around the city. For most parts of the year the weather and climate of Hyderabad remains fairly moderate." - Ditto

Sorry, didn't get you. X.One ^SOS 09:35, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am wanting you to find a source for that quotation.--12george1 (talk) 04:19, 24 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Removed a bit of text, which is more or less present in the next para. X.One ^SOS 12:04, 25 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Rrainwater harvesting, water and sewerage services" - typo

Done --Omer123hussain (talk) 09:11, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"The other major railway stations are Hyderabad Deccan Station, Kachiguda Railway Station and Begumpet Railway Station." - Unsourced

Done, moved the source below as it contains same info.--Omer123hussain (talk) 09:51, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Why do you need a source for that? They are linked to their respective articles and they are very much in Hyderabad only, as their pages say. X.One ^SOS 09:35, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"The yellow-coloured auto rickshaw are" - Pick either one: "The yellow-coloured auto richshaws are" or "The yellow-coloured auto richshaw is"

Done

"The Times of India, The Hinduand The Deccan Chronicle." - Add a space and comma between "Hindu" and "and"

Done --Omer123hussain (talk) 09:14, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"There are four fixed telephone line operators in the city BSNL, Tata Indicom, Reliance and Airtel. There are fifteen mobile phone companies in which GSMplayers include Vodafone, Airtel, BSNL, Idea, Tata DoCoMo, Reliance, Virgin Mobile, T24, Aircel and Uninor ; CDMA services are offered by BSNL, Virgin Mobile, Tata Indicom, MTS India and Reliance. 3G mobile services are offered by Airtel, Idea, Aircel and BSNL." - Unsourced

Done.--Omer123hussain (talk) 09:28, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reference #103, #154 and #181 are a deadlinks. You might be able to find an archive of these URLs at the Way Back Machine.

Corrected #103, #154 and #181. :)regards. --Omer123hussain (talk) 23:07, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It looks good. Overall, no major problems have come up. So I will let you have up to a week to fix the issues I have found on this article.--12george1 (talk) 15:40, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, everything looks good. Therefore, I will now be passing this article.--12george1 (talk) 23:34, 27 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]