Talk:I'm God/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 05:43, 30 December 2023 (UTC)

Reviewer: NegativeMP1 (talk · contribs) 04:58, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Well, that's certainly a bold claim. λ NegativeMP1 04:58, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Prose

• Add "(2012)" after Instrumentals 2 in Background and release
  • I don't think it's needed, as the phrase says Volpe released it "The next year..." (after a sentence situated in 2011)
• "Paul Simpson of AllMusic said that the vocals, which bring a cave-like, dank atmosphere," Possibly needs to be attributed / put in quotations
  • Done

Media

• Both the infobox image and the audio sample are warranted, and are justified by fair use.
• Preferably add alt text to the image of Heap.
  • Done

Source spotcheck

• Spotchecked some uses of refs #3 and #5, seems to verify article text.

Final comments

Extremely well written article on an interesting subject, and I have few complaints. I'll have no issue passing this article once the two extremely minor issues I noticed above are addressed. λ NegativeMP1 05:20, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

@NegativeMP1: Thank you! Responded. Skyshiftertalk 10:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Above comments look good, but I'm going to take a second look later today. I reviewed this article in forty minutes, the fastest I've ever reviewed an article, and I want to make sure I didn't miss anything. Hopefully that's okay with you. λ NegativeMP1 15:58, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Yep, that's fine. No rush. Skyshiftertalk 16:28, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

@NegativeMP1: any updates? Skyshiftertalk 21:45, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

I was out of the house for a little bit there and I ended up forgetting to get back to this. I'll take a second look soon, I apologize for the wait. λ NegativeMP1 21:49, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

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