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GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 17:44, 1 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Wow, you should thank your signature for this review. I was just skimming through WP:GAN and your signature caught my eye and I decided to review this one. It looks interesting too. This may take a while as it has been a while since I last reviewed due to a wikibreak. Cheers, TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:44, 1 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The Review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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Just saying, here's a good site for reviewing articles. You may find it helpful for reviewing articles. It's an automated tip generator here.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:40, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Well written



 Done Ah thanks.. ƬheStrikeΣagle 14:14, 3 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


  • In the year 2010 change to in 2010. Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise.  Done
  • What is FOCINCWEST? You have to explain all abbreviations beforehand.  Done
  • They were tasked to patrol approaches - doesn't flow  Done Tell me if it's good enough now ƬheStrikeΣagle 14:42, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • to public - change to "to the public"  Done
Referencing
  • ref 12 is a dead link
  • ref 32 is a dead link
  • ref 56 is a dead link
Ref 12 works fine for me...and ref 32 and 56 don't exist! ƬheStrikeΣagle 14:42, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, sorry. I looked at Checklinks for the wrong page. I was checking two pages at the same time. So much for multi-tasking. The correct ones are 15 and 18.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:30, 2 August 2014 (UTC)  Done[reply]
Broadness
was repaired within months - how long excatly? That we don't know. The author (former rear admiral) doesn't mention the exact time unfortunately.
shifted to a new patrol location - where? We added all we could from public sources...so if it's not available, I guess they want it to remain confidential! ƬheStrikeΣagle 14:42, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Stability
  • no problems
Images
  • no problems