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Good articleI Admit (Sanda song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 27, 2018Good article nomineeListed
August 7, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
October 28, 2022Good topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:I Admit (Sanda song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 25 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:08, 25 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • "as a CD single in 2004 by the Romanian Television (TVR)." - just having by Romanian Television (TVR). is the correct term to refer to it in English

Background and composition

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  • "A CD single (music) of "I Admit" was released in Romania in 2004 by the Romanian Television (TVR) in Romania," - reword this section of sentence to A CD single of "I Admit" was released in Romania in 2004 by Romanian Television (TVR),

In Istanbul

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  • "According to the then-Eurovision rules, selected countries, except the host country" - nation to avoid reptition
  • "As automatically qualified for the final due to Romania's top 11 placement the previous year," - As she
  • "During her show, the singer" - she so that we don't have two mentions of the word singer in the sentence this is part of
  • "writing for Augsburger Allgemeine criticized Sanda's" - criticised

Management

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  • "Published by the Romanian Television (TVR)" - just Romanian Television will suffice

Not too much for you to do. Just the minor quibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 12:30, 26 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Hi there and thank you for reviewing another one of my short Eurovision articles. I think I have adressed all your queries above. Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:49, 26 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]